Thursday 22 November 2018

Quick Write


Quick Write

The morning light shined through a hole in my curtain. My eyes started bilking open, rolling onto my side to doge the light I shoved my face in my pillow. Needing to get up, I lazily force my legs to get out of my bed. My legs hit the ground. Falling onto the floor I hear my mum say “come on breakfast is ready’’. With a happy thought in my head, I need to find a way to get there faster. Wobbling the to the stairs I pull myself up on the arm rest helper thats on the stairs, and slide my way down. Missing the landing, I land on my bum. Doing a hip raise because my bum hurt I land on my face cause I done it to forsfully. I WAS TO LATE MY BREAKFAST WAS ALL GONE.

I like this quick write because, I use persuasion and use speech marks and overall it is a good quick write.


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