Quick Write

Quick Write

The morning light shined through a hole in my curtain. My eyes started bilking open, rolling onto my side to doge the light I shoved my face in my pillow. Needing to get up, I lazily force my legs to get out of my bed. My legs hit the ground. Falling onto the floor I hear my mum say “come on breakfast is ready’’. With a happy thought in my head, I need to find a way to get there faster. Wobbling the to the stairs I pull myself up on the arm rest helper thats on the stairs, and slide my way down. Missing the landing, I land on my bum. Doing a hip raise because my bum hurt I land on my face cause I done it to forsfully. I WAS TO LATE MY BREAKFAST WAS ALL GONE.

I like this quick write because, I use persuasion and use speech marks and overall it is a good quick write.

Quick Write

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Particles of dust drifted. One by one down a brown boot. The soft brown dust slid its way down onto the ground. Starting to form a pile the size of a teaspoon. Stepping a foot away from the boot more dust appeared. Peeping my head over the brown boot I could see that a mouse or 2 had been chewing on my boot. The seems of the boot were gone. Bending my arm down to go and see more of what's inside. Something small. Something like a MOUSE. The mouse was still in the boot. Chewing on the seams.

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Quick Write

A quick write is when our teacher give us 20 to 30 minutes to write. Our teacher gives us the sentence starter. A quick write is a fast short writing time. Here is my quick write I did today.

Tuesday 22 May 2018
As I slid down the muddy bank, a sharp pain shot up my leg.
Looked down and there it was a sharp stick stuck right up my leg. "OH GOSH PLEASE NO"
I screamed in agony. As I sat up, stumble fall face first. Ouch not my good leg. I had to make it to the other side before dark. Barley standing i stumble the whole way. I see mum in the distance waiting, waving. I barely held mum i'm over here. Blacked out. TO BE CONTINUED.